I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
hi Chloe I really like your animation because you had a problem in it. this reminds me of when I was making an animation with my friends. next time can you please make the animation longer. from Amber
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LOVE IT!!
ReplyDeletehi Chloe
ReplyDeleteI really like your animation because you had a problem in it.
this reminds me of when I was making an animation with my friends.
next time can you please make the animation longer.
from Amber