- One day my friend was feeling lonely and upset. All of his mates had a girlfriend but he couldn’t seem to get one, so he created one himself. He got a mop and put one of his little sisters bows on top of it. Then he named it Olivia and hung out with it all day. When he was hanging out with his friends they would make fun of him but they also called him a legend. He was embarrassed at times when people laughed at him but his friends stood up for him. But in the end he was no longer lonely.
- There once lived an amazing rock star who wore a mask and his identity was unknown. Jimmy and all his friends were his biggest fan they had merchandise and everything. Little did jimmy's friends know Jimmy was actually the rock star but he kept it as a secret. On the final song of his last concert ever Jimmy removed his mask and revealed his secret. After that iconic moment Jimmy’s friends screamed in the crowd while the rest of the crowd was dead silent. One of them even started crying of happiness. At the after party his friends ran up to him and asked him a million questions, he explained everything and they partied for the rest of the night.
Kia ora Chloe
ReplyDeleteMaybe next time you could highlight the words you had to write about but overall your story was really nice to read and short but hope to read more of your story's.
Sincerely Shontae