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Friday, September 2, 2016

A Path To Where?...

A Path To Where...
                                        By Chloe Woods

A flower flew in the distance and led me to a spectacular place that I never imagined I would see. I suddenly tripped and fell in a wonderful cozy patch of flowers. I said to myself ”Where am I? ” I lifted my heavy head and saw a beautiful path full of violet flowers. They looked eye catching!

I quickly dashed through the flower garden and went home to tell my annoying brother. Of course he was asleep so I woke him up by shrieking at him and said, ”Wake up right now!” So he did. I told him all about the flower forest. He said to me, ”YOU HAVE TO TAKE ME THERE.”

For some weird reason I remembered where it was. So I led him there and when we got there he was speechless. He said, ”We have to go further”, in a very in a hair raising voice. Just after he had said we have to go further I had an insane idea.  What if I was the first person to find the hidden fairy land?

My brother looked at me in a disapproving way. We both started sprinting through the thorny brown bushes getting pricked by everyone. Finally we got to the end. In front of us we saw a very giant tree. In the tree it glittered and we saw tiny little people flying around. I thought to myself, “Ok we better head back.”

‘NO!’ screamed my brother. I started to head back and my brother followed. The reason why I didn’t want to go in was because I hated fairies. I thought I was going to find something exciting. My brother was furious at me all week. I lay down on my bed and I still thought about that place...

3 comments:

  1. Awesome story Chloe(bestie)! It was so interesting,I have a question why would you take your brother into the woods. I have nothing to correct you on! :)

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  2. Thanks Abby I'm really happy you enjoyed it! I took my brother into the woods so he could she the beautiful sight of flowers.

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